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I choose the 2011 essay for two reasons Intro/conclusion and Transition of ideas. In my opinion my 2011 essay shows that I can write a good intro and conclusion if I put me mind into it. I think my intro iIhad a nice hook, because right away i stated a fact, which is in my opinion some what interesting. Im not used to starting off a paragraph with a fact, usually i start with a question or trying to relate with the readers. This intro confirmed that I can do something different once in awhile.
Furthermore, I noticed I can use transitions in other ways that how we are taught and still get do very well on it. We are taught to start paragraphs off with a transititons then to stop and leave it at that. However, I feel if you know how to use them and that word at the exact moment makes perfect sense transititons can sometimes go anywhere.
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